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I like that Daesha'rel said that their was a creature and that there was footsteps on the floor.
The story that Daesha'rel said it was so terrifying.
She could have said, she could have said instead; a fiery breath instead of saying breath.
I like how Jevaunte read so nice and clearly.
I like that she used an exclamation mark
I love how he used such interesting words in his description.
Joseph, how did you know she used an exclamation mark if you only heard her writing and did not see it written out?
I like how Jevaunte talked about the lizard and didn't say it was a dragon at first.
Because I heard her voice was getting bigger and she was scared.
I would use more interesting words next time like terrified and ferocious.
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I like how she said the woods were wild because it's different and interesting.
I felt impressed by Daesha'rel's story because it was so exciting and scary!
I like when Friha used capitals letters and full stops.
when we were in the 159 bus we saw the london eye
we saw wong kie we eat nodls for the chopstiks when we finished our lunch we walk to the bus stop